I looked into the eyes of the
Dead man
They were open and covered in
Chalk grey cataracts
Glistening
In the moonlight
I heard the cries of his
Child
As she wept over his cold
Corpse
She looked like a sheet
Dirty
Wet
Gently swaying in the wind
Clinging there to her
Father
Crying out to the heavens
“Why him!?”
“Why take him!?”
Only the heavens did
Not
Answer
They were
Silent
Dark
Still
Nothing moved but her
Tears
And the
Insects
That gathered on the
Cataracts
Coveting their
Meal
Great, powerful stuff. You site reminds me of MAS*H, combining great satire with austere moments such as these, forcing people to reflect.
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Thanks again. Great compliment. Speaking of MASH, I sure wish Alan Alda were my dad. I think he’d make a great dad. So, Alan, if you’re reading this, can we go fishing together soon?
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Yeah, I get what you mean…he seems like someone who’d be good at being a dad. He’s like Bill Cosby, only actually funny;)
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Alan Alda occasionally appears on a show I like called “The Blacklist” with James Spader. He plays a semi-bad guy. He’s good at that too.
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very solemn. I like how you can change from extreme satire to an examination of human loss. This is brilliant my good man.
Happy weekend
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Thank you my friend. Happy weekend to you.
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I like that, “Self-Proclaimed Nobel Prize Winner”
And I thought my “Infallible hack” handle was choice. 😉
I like this part the best:
“Only the heavens did
Not
Answer”
I can feel that so clearly. Beautiful work.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment and your taking the time to stop by for the visit. Now, if I only could get the damned Nobel Committee to give my award, my weekend would be off to a great start.
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ROFL !!!
I love it!
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I’ve been at war with the Nobel Committee over this issue for a while now. Here’s a post on it you might like: https://variouspontifications.com/2013/12/24/nobel-prize-committee-sends-drone-to-kill-me-after-prank-call/
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Naah, I didn’t like it. I loved it!
You can see I don’t have no little bit of my arz left. I laughed it off.
Wow, you really have a gift for writing humor.
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Thank you greatly for the compliments.
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They’re easy to write when the humor is that good. I got to get to bed before I kill the last three.
Remaining neurons.
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I’ve killed all my neurons. Now all I’ve left are morons.
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I know a guy who knows a guy called “Guido The Convincer/Expediter,” I’ll ring him up on your behalf.
Those Noble Guys know they are mortal. And if not, Guido will lead them to the light.
Great post!
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Thank you kindly, my friend. Guido the Convincer. Now there’s a guy I’d like to know.
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It all depends on whom he is ‘convincing’
Heheheh
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Good point. You’ve convinced me.
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LOL
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😀
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One of your very best – storyline, passion and truth; it’s all there.
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Greatly appreciate the comment my friend.
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